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laconic
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since 2002-02-17
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0 posted 2002-03-24 06:00 AM



love is like a cappacino, a beautiful bitter sweet taste
love is like a short esspresso, passionate in it's haste
love is like a moca java, rich in it's flavour
love is like a fresh squeezed orange juice, sour once it's over.

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Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31
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1 posted 2002-03-24 03:28 PM


"love is like a short esspresso, passionate in it's haste"

I love this line! Great poem . . .

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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the wonderful land of oz
2 posted 2002-03-24 03:55 PM


love the analogies.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
3 posted 2002-03-24 08:55 PM


Great Metaphors!!!!!
Short and Sweet ooorrr is it bitter???

~Lisa

katherine
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Canberra Australia
4 posted 2002-03-25 04:41 AM


coffee is good very good
i love this it's so cool.

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