Teen Poetry #5 |
coffeeshop love |
laconic Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 64Melbourne, Australia |
love is like a cappacino, a beautiful bitter sweet taste love is like a short esspresso, passionate in it's haste love is like a moca java, rich in it's flavour love is like a fresh squeezed orange juice, sour once it's over. |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
"love is like a short esspresso, passionate in it's haste" I love this line! Great poem . . . Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
love the analogies. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Great Metaphors!!!!! Short and Sweet ooorrr is it bitter??? ~Lisa |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
coffee is good very good i love this it's so cool. |
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