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Tea with a Crocodile
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Tea with a Crocodile |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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And now for something completly different: Tea with a crocodile. I sat a while with a Crocodile, while we took some tea, The Crocodile had swam a mile, chasing after me, His great big smile needed a file, though I doubt he would agree, For the crocodile, he needs his smile, if he wants to try eat me, So as I try to rile this Crocodile, as I sit up on this tree, This crocodile I find has guile, and I have no time to flee Though the Crocodile had swam a mile, chasing after me, He had used his smile to make a file, and he cut down my safe tree Now it was in the style to wear Crocodile, but now he laughs in glee For the crocodile can wear his smile and now he can wear me So there we go another crocodile related poem for my crocodile series, I hope you all enjoy  Andrew "I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro [This message has been edited by Marshalzu (03-19-2002 09:06 AM).] |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
to cute zu to cute lol! i am me don't tell me different!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Damn, there goes Zu. *grins* The second time I managed to get through this, I managed to do so without laughing, and I must say I enjoyed the read! Gotta love ya! I am a rabid horse. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Zu, I love it!  I wish I had some deep response for you.... because I know you and I enjoy those, but *waves hands* I don't have one! I merely loved the read, it was a spendidly done humorous poem - which is an extremely hard one to do. The situation and chain of events were rather commical  Spendid job mate.~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
crocs are cool. verrrrrry interesting. see you in a while, crocodile. /gwen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
HAHAHAHA....This was great... I was almost eaten by an alligator...it was scary.... But back to the poem...GREAT WRITE.... ~Lisa |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
lol, very cute Zu! How becoming of you. ~_^ It reminds me a lot of those poems that I used to read (or get my mom to read to me...) as a kid. It's cute all over! ^__^ Thanks for the read! Leah |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!....thats not fair! how come he got to eat you instead?...reminds me of 'jeepers creepers' *shudders* but we wont go there.. nice write andy... keep the witty ones coming!  My england is goodly- are you strudable? |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
The first thing I must say the name got me in here LOL.. It's really nice... Nice hilarious though..hehe.. good one Thx for making start my day with a smile on my face. Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for repling your huggles are in the post Andrew: Huggle Administrator |
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