Teen Poetry #5 |
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24 Hours |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
24 Hours. © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Down town in a rushed crowd a guy buys the mornin' paper, the headlines say that most folks don't return a favor. Same time a few blocks down a cab driver makes a living, in the mornin' traffic the meter is slowly ticking... A man bragging about his job unaware he lost it, on every light poll there's a picture of a lost kid, And on the TV there's a broadcast about a high speed chase, 'cause someone stole a car at the wrong time at the wrong place... It's a hot summer day children are playing in the park, a rich old couple married 40 years buys a car. they don't even need they just wanna spend their money, two guys rob a bank just because they think it's funny. As the cops draw their guns a little girl gets hit, just because one guy had to pull that kinda hero ****. knockin' on ms. Jones door it's a cop, she gets out of bed, in sadness he tells her that her little girl is dead. The sun goes down over the beautiful city of bliss, but tomorrow there'll be another day just like this... [This message has been edited by Hallucination (03-24-2002 12:43 PM).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Wow, I totally felt this one.Very good job. So sad, yet so true. I wanna see more like it. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
This really shows what is going on in the world now a days, think about it, as I sit here typing thousands of people are leaving this world, and thousands of people are coming in... ~Lisa |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
ya kno i never really thought of life like this but ur very right unfortunately...horrible things go on around us that we have no clue of...hm..food for thought..thanks for sharing! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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