.....?/ [Hi! My names Despair] -Last piece for Passions

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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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0 posted 2002-03-23 07:05 PM

Breathing not,
For me.
Why am I...
The way I am?
Promised with
Only love.
My heart hurts,
As I despair. Trying
To believe,
In something else...
But I am
Pathetic to write
About the things;
Thats Fading...

Goodbye.

"Dont piss me off, Im runing out of places to hide the bodies."

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (03-23-2002 07:39 PM).]

Kit McCallum

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1 posted 2002-03-23 08:14 PM

You've captured some very intense and sad feelings in this piece Albert ... I hope your are OK? Please check your mail ...

Best wishes and hugs

/Kit

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-03-23 10:44 PM

This was very good...but are you ok? What do you mean last peice for passions?

Great write, email me if you need to....\

~Lisa

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

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the wonderful land of oz

3 posted 2002-03-24 02:05 AM

wow.

i'm speechless.

[that's a good thing].

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

4 posted 2002-03-24 02:54 AM

Hey you better not be leaving, you! Come back and write more poems for me to read!!! *sniff*

Hopelessly in love

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

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Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2002-03-24 12:37 PM

This was good, very sad. You don't wanna go out on a negative note do you? At least it's the dramatic way to go...
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

Marshalzu

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Lurking

6 posted 2002-03-24 06:38 PM

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us, I really enjoyed the read. I am hoping that this won't be the last we see of your work and that you will stay at passions or if you can't I hope that you can keep in touch some way

Hope to see you around some time mate

Andrew: Huggle Administraitor

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katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

7 posted 2002-03-25 04:47 AM

hey this is sad are you ok?
if you want to talk i'm here(thats only if you want to talk to me really i don't bite)

Allysa

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In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2002-03-25 04:14 PM

You seem to know how I feel...

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

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Quebec, Canada

9 posted 2002-03-25 07:14 PM

Hey there...its been a while....
well i enjoyed the poem.
good luck.

regina

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2002-03-26 02:14 PM

I hope your not saying what u think im saying...please dont be goin off and leavin on me now!!! Im gonna miss you way to much!! This was an amazing piece...great job!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

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11 posted 2002-03-26 06:38 PM

Alby-

Well, Despair, I shall see you later. As for now, you, as well as your work and replies will be missed. More than missed. Your absence shall be felt, my friend.

And of the poem? The sadness and depression that lurks behind your eyes makes me wonder if there is more to this poem than you are letting on. Good luck, Alby. *hugs*

*wails and bigger hugs* You're coming next.

-Leah

"...and sometimes when the music whispers quiet in your ears
take some time to dream a dream and put aside your fears..."

Starr
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since 2001-02-08

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12 posted 2002-03-27 01:43 PM

This is good.. You seem lost a bit.. Talk about it, it helps..
Very nice writing.. hope you're staying... and not leaving I only just came back ... and to see you leave now?!?! ...

Misty

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

anonymousfemale
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Limbo

13 posted 2003-05-14 11:13 AM

*sighs* I miss you and your writing. The emails haven't been getting through so I hope you're ok. Your poetry always brought out such intense emotions in me.

Be safe, my friend.

~AF~

I'm not being rude. You're just insignificant.

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

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Transylconia, Winnipeg

14 posted 2003-05-14 02:49 PM

I think it's kind of neat. He left precisely a year after he came. Too bad Feb 23 this year didn't see his return...

Oh well... just another forgotten name, I guess.

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.

~Percy Bysshe Shelley

Barbara
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since 2003-01-24

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15 posted 2003-05-24 12:48 PM

THATS JUST THE WAY I FEEL JUST RIGHT NOW!
Thank you for this poem!

Barbara

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