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Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-03-19 02:20 PM

Waking up to the sun,
slowly coming through my window.
Sun rise to sun set,
they both are such a wonderful sight.
The bright light shines through my window,
like it was sent from up above.
I try to ignore it, and close the blinds
but nice warmth light slowly passes over my bed,
and slowly I begin to wake up.
The shadows start to appear on my wall,
how they imitate my every move.
They get up, I get up.
But I don't get up.
with each waking second, life goes by.
It seems like I shouldn’t even move.
So quiet, So peaceful.
You must enjoy your time alone,
before It is gone.
How quiet the morning sun can be,
only hearing myself breathe.
Nothing else to get you up.
Today is a new day, yesterday is gone.
The sun rose today, and will set tonight.
Tommrow morning will be the same,
execpt that I will wake up to an alarm clock.

"Water Over Matter"

Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-03-19 02:51 PM

i like ur poem a lot it makes sence you are doin a good job write some more and i will reply to everyone of them so you can get some credits and so i can give you coplments on ur work you do a good job keep it up.

     love kevin reid
      aka dunphy
       [email protected]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-03-19 04:52 PM

I don't know what to say to this other than I like it. It's definately lighter than a lot of the poems I've read lately. Thanks for the change!

I am a rabid horse.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-04-18 03:08 AM

Lisa-
I really enjoyed reading this.
Very well written!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-04-18 01:38 PM

Great job on this hun! You loved how you wrote it and it sounds like a very beautiful sight!! Darn alarm clocks gotta ruin everything...

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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