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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA 
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in everyones heart there's a smile you gotts luv in a gigantic pile in god you gotts ta show reminesce then let it flow all tha evil you gotts ta let go and all tha good air let it flow wit luv you gotts ta take it slow cause in a relationship it wont blow wit luv try ta make it rhyme in thiss world you gotts lotts of time all of us cone frun tha light all tha fine gurlz look so right soon enough time to tha end relax an spen time wit my friend Kevin Reid (aka) Dunphy  |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwww that's so cute!!!! i loved it! Robin i am me don't tell me different!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Right on! This I think, is the first of yours that I've written, but I'm definately going to read more! I am a rabid horse. |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
thanx skyfire for replying and robin it was kind of you to do that you didn't have to. i am thankfull that peeps read my poems. some times i write them cause it reaches to the heart and makes peeps think. it also even makles me think too. the world is full wit supprisess and tat's true. kevin reid aks dunphy 18 m mass.  [This message has been edited by Dunphy (03-19-2002 02:39 PM).] |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
WOO! Yeah. ^_^ This is awesome, really is! It just carried itself along...the beat to this really helped with the flow. It was nice the way you wrote it, really carefree. Thanks for sharing! -Leah |
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