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In a Glass of Orange Juice
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In a Glass of Orange Juice |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Hola  I had to write this for class, it's an accurate portrayal of my evil Writer's Block...msn me if you need\want an explanation, cuz this is packed with personal symbolism. *points to the envelope above* I miss all of you, especially the oldies...lots of hugs to you especially. PIP sure is changing, and it's kinda neat gazing from the outside...  In a Glass of Orange Juice sailing through the groves abloom i wonder if that's me up there rolling upward to a room, a faintful tower, bellmen's flare never stopped the hurling bows while ever wanted me to play and play my cello's overflow, i've done oratory sense abashed when i'm relaxed above the stair hovered once, i'll someday crash for wrenches broke from lack of pears heaving, wheezing, almost there a number twice revealing me; I pray my cello's playing "Thirty-Three" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
always a pleasure reading from you love. *peck* even if it is rare now a days. miss you and i miss your work carly. keep writtin hun. love you so much. *snuffle* tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
caaaaaaaaarrrrrl-eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey! again, so many words, so little of which i understand  ...i liked reading it, perhaps someday i'd figure out what it is that makes you tick, but until that day i dont think i would be able to figure out what this poem is about  ...keep posting more often!Zombie |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Carly, Carly, Carly. What a wonderful poem as usual you astound me with the beauty of the words, this is a wonderful peice and thank you for sharing it with us  See this through and leave my friend, the tears will come and I will end. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Carly! I loved it. I can see now why the oldies loved your work, and you. Splendid job here. I, btw, am (the) Titus, the One and Only, lover of the "Titus Dance." HaHaHa!  I'm mostly harmless, don't worry...sailing through the groves abloom i wonder if that's me up there rolling upward to a room, a faintful tower, bellmen's flare What wonderful imagery and symbolsim you've got! Wicked! ~ Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-01-2002 07:09 PM).] |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Bump You have been bitten by the Zu bug |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hehehe...I'm sitting here---looking like an idiot..with a smile on my face...because I have no idea what this poem means! Lol, it's sorta got a cooky...out of this world thingy to it! I'm...at a loss of words! Lol, sorry Carley! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
'ello Carlita! I'm getting a different meaning out of this that I won't share here. I know you won't have written about this particular subject. There are some beautiful lines in there with vivid imagery. I'd like to say I know what it's about but to be perfectly honest, I don't. It does read well though with a very mystical sense. Well done. Be proud for you have confused the hell out of all of us.  ~AF~ ::Most people never listen:: |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yep, you all figured me out  I live for the sole purpose of confusion! mwa ha ha "Hey! The oven's on!" "Kari! The oven's on!" "I know, Jim! I'm baking something!" [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (03-09-2002 04:31 PM).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
The words went together beautifully, but the meaning escaped me. Sorry, it sounded awesome, but for some reason I drew a blank Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
Okay? Say what? o_O; HaHa as always...its been a pleasant reading; "heaving, wheezing, almost there a number twice revealing me; I pray my cello's playing "Thirty-Three" lol I liked it...interesting piece, interesting title. "Dont piss me off, Im runing out of places to hide the bodies." [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (03-18-2002 10:47 PM).] |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Back from the dead!  ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
amazing. best piece i've read in a while. wow. /gwen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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