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Teen Poetry #5

i love you forever

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-04-05 05:13 PM

i dont think you know
how much i love you
maybe you just dont want to see it
it hurts inside when im not near you
i may never get the chance
to be with some one
some one so special as you
i dont know what to say
but only one thing
i love you more than words can describe

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-04-05 07:23 PM

Lovely sentiments from the heart Corey ... your intended is a lucky person indeed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (04-05-2002 07:24 PM).]

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2002-04-05 09:50 PM

Good for you.
Sometimes just to know you can love someone so completely is a feat in and of itself. If it's meant to be she'll feel it too...one day.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-04-18 04:08 AM

Corey-
You've penned your thoughts beautifully
and sincerely. I could feel them as I read.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-04-18 01:30 PM

The feeling of love can be so overwhelming..especially when you have no where to go with it. Im shur a lot of us have been in the same boat. Great poem..short and sweet

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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