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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA 
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my soul is back in tha darkness can life it self be so harmless? i seriously don't know why i feel like i do wanna cry. some day life will end will enta armma-geddon. my soul as it will go to hell nobody will say but i can tell. when it does please don't cry words from my mouth are no lie. all my life i'ev had more than one sorrow maybe it wont, be till tha day of tomorrow. only god can say but i tell you sumthin right now i know i'm goin ta hell as i can tell. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
If this sounds to Christian like tell me... As long as you are sincerely sorry for the sins that you have committed, then you will not go to hell. ALthough some may not believe it, you know what you have done wrong, and you realize it, you are truly the best kind of person... and your poem was great... ~Lisa |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
no you wuzn't bein religios i am christain and catholic. thank you for replying to me. it wuzz nice of you you didn't have to but i want to thank you. i think you are a very kind hearted soul because god sent you here on earth. he gave earth a special gift and it's true. well i want to thank you again for replying to me it wuzz very thoughtful. i hope you will reply to my otha poems or to tha same ones. love kevin reid aka dunphy 18 m mass. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I understand where you're coming from and I was raised Catholic (tho I consider myself to be Agnostic with some kind of views, it's like Euthatarian or something, I can say but can't spell). Anyways, good write and WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Teenage emotions are the strangest things, aren't they, Kevin - One day you're up and the next you're down... Just keep on writing... And everyone here will keep reading....  |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hey hun great poem kinda disturbing with the going to hell part but i know it's just a poem. god work. robin i am me don't tell me different!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I know where you are. Wow that just described my entire life. Excellent write! I am a rabid horse. |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
allysa and lisa i just wanna thank you for replyin to me that was thoughtful of you both. you didn't have to do that you know but i thank you very much. i will look at more of you comments when you reply to me and take my time to read them  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Really good job here  I really hope you dont go to hell hun..doesnt seem like it'd be that great of a place to be for all eternity and if you do wanna cry...get the water works started because you'll feel so much betta after a nice long cry... Great job..keep em comin!iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, this was a pretty good post. i can't really reply to it from a religious perspective, seeing how i wasn't raised with any religious influence at all, but as a fellow writer i would say it definetly has a lot of potential. thanks for sharing this, it was a very good read. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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