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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
3/17/2002 8:09 PM Title: In Time In time we shared laughter You dried my tears Took away my problems My fears And gave me love. In time at night I dreamed Of you spoon fashion Next to me lying In your arms at night You made me smile Brightened my day. In time the skies were gray Now there blue Knifes stabbed my body But you were there to pull them out. In time I thought you Cared for me Understood my pain But instead you Made me hurt again. In time we faded far apart My heart don’t love you anymore We’re two different people Love no longer In our hearts. By: Me ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i like very nicely done *applauds* i am me don't tell me different!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Its amazing what time can do....great job! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
inspiredpoetwriter- Very well written piece. Nicely done.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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