Teen Poetry #5 |
Dyeing to love you. |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
( Brian ) OH, baby Where have you been all of my life HEY, lady Say what about dinner tonight I’ll treat you real nice, So what do you say, Me you at the movies. ( All ) Baby I’m dyeing to love you And love is all that I have to give Yeah I’m dyeing to love you Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive Every drop of love is true, ( baby ) I’m dyeing to love you ( Haidar ) UH, honey Do you wanna go out on a date OH, baby I really hope it’s not to late Know the perfect place, So what do you say, Me you please say yes. ( All ) Cause I’m dyeing to love you And love is all that I have to give Yeah I’m dyeing to love you Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive Every drop of love is true, ( baby ) I’m dyeing to love you ( Ali ) All I want is one romantic night To show you that I’m true Just look into my eyes And you’ll find nothing but you. ( Cause baby ) ( All ) I’m dyeing to love you And love is all that I have to give Yeah I’m dyeing to love you Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive Every drop of love is true, ( baby ) I’m dyeing to love you ( All ) I’m dyeing to love you ( dyeing ) ( to love you ) And love is all that I have to give ( all I have to give ) Yeah I’m dyeing to love you ( yeah baby ) Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive ( promise ) ( I’ll be sensitive ) Every drop of love is true, ( baby ) ( every drop ) I’m dyeing to love you ( Michael ) I’m dyeing to love you ( Ali ) I’m dyeing to love you ( Haidar ) I’m dyeing to love you ( Brian ) I’m dyeing to love you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is something you'd have to hear to fully appreciate the art within it. Wonderful job though. I could picture it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you do this so well I like this |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
songs you write are great ...i liked it...and mp3..please?! im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
All honesty? The song was fine...but the fact that Dying was spelled dyeing throughout the whole thing really turned me off to it. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is one of those I'd love to hear sung. Got an MP3? hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I would also like to hear this on MP3. It didn't strike me as a song I would praticularly like... This isn't your best. Thanks for sharing, though.. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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