Teen Poetry #5 |
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'The Past You' part 3 |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
this was awesome, i like it a lot, i could totallly relate. good job It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Nicely done ![]() BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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Barelybreathing Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 46 |
Very nicely written..thanks for sharing 'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.' |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
this poem is powerful, i can REALLY relate... Thanks for showing me how it's done. After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
omgosh..i can SO relate *muffled laughter* snifters. this is a great umm..tri-quel? to your poem, bucko! So..so, sew..so..emotional, but no, that's not the word I'm looking for. so, yeah. but! I think you know she loves you..Would you constantly decide to remain 'with her' if you didn't think so? *note the rhetoricality of the question?* :P Nice write. __o0o_Anna_o0o__ *HugZieS & WaveZieS* Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
*bump* |
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