A girl on her knees begging pleading please

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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

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Sparks, NV

0 posted 2002-03-12 12:31 PM

A girl on her knees begging pleading please
she crys but no one hears.
she is in pain and suffering,
from all the hurt that eats at her.
A girl on her knees begging pleading please

A girl on her knees begging pleading please
GOD take it all away!!
all the pain and suffering,
i cannot endure.
the life she is leading will be no more.
a new life she will live.
A girl on her knees begging pleading please

A girl on her knees begging pleading please
i will fight the battle.
i will be free.
so no more begging and pleading i will endure.
A girl on her knees begging pleading please

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (03-15-2002 02:42 AM).]

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since 2002-02-13

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1 posted 2002-03-12 02:07 PM

sorry to hear the pain in this poem but great all the same nice one, Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

2 posted 2002-03-12 04:20 PM

"i will fight the battle.
i will be free."

Yes you will. Just don't forget to lean on someone when you need to. Great write Robin!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2002-03-12 04:50 PM

you know i always do rhonda!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-03-13 04:45 AM

here's the fighter!!

....nice poem robbie...it went straight to the heart. i really hope youre doing well sweetheart

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

5 posted 2002-03-14 01:00 AM

i am doin just plumdumdandy cherry!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-03-15 02:16 AM

Robin, I really enjoyed this read. it's one of your better ones. Stay strong, you always have my support.

~ Titus

In My Mind's Eye, In My Mind's Eye...

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-15-2002 02:16 AM).]

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2002-03-15 03:24 AM

tks hun i hope you got my email i understood what i was tring to get across to you. okies bye!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2002-03-15 11:32 AM

This poem really had a lot of pain in it...it was sad and made me want to reach out and help...great job robin!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

9 posted 2002-03-17 05:34 AM

Hey Robin. Wow... This one's really good, I enjoyed the read. Lots of emotion here, rather sad, but a great write still. Good job, girl!

      - Cody -

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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
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since 2001-12-24

Posts 36
im a louisiana cajun princess! lol

10 posted 2002-03-17 03:23 PM

oh my...... all i can say is wow. related to it. awesome awesome job, you gots tons of talent.

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