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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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Longing for a glimps of days gone by. Desiring the past, yet here in the now. So much pain, so much torment. All sorrow, all lies. Happiness is in the days, the days gone by. Nevermore, and too hard to repeat. My future may be bright, but our past is dark as hell. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-17-2002 09:10 PM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Wow Titus... I really can relate to this poem, its lie you are not only reading my thoughts, but you are reading my heart and soul as well....And what my heart, soul, and mind say somehow landed on this website.... Great Write Lisa |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
"My future may be bright, but our past is dark as hell." The story of my life.. *hugs* I love it. It's meaningful, but it's got some attitude about it. Or something like that... I'm delirious... lack of sleep can do that to you. Or perhaps it was the 5 cherry icees I drank tonight at work. Love, Me -- the calm before the storm -- |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww sweety...why are you writing dark?? OooOOoOO i jus wanna make all your pain go away!! ::HUGS:: iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
*hugs*....the future is not always bright, and neither is the past always so dark...i really do hope that you find the balance needed to sustain life danniti...nice write deary  Zombie |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I should go to bed now..but I read this after you left...*purrs like a wounded kitten* sad..what brought this poem on? as the others have said it's like u've read my journals and read my soul... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
The past is dark because everything we've ever done follows with a shadow - good or bad. Don't look at is as a bad thing. Sometimes the darkness needs to be there in order to remind us that we *are* human.  Short but sweet so that's all good, Ti. I enjoyed the read and I sincerely hope things look up for you soon. Stay strong you. ~AF~ "Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"Happiness is in the days, the days gone by. Nevermore, and too hard to repeat." That reminds me and affected me the "most" throughtout the poem; Simply written with a lot of thought, I liked it. Hope all is well, Ti. "Dont piss me off, Im runing out of places to hide the bodies..." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow, very emotional! I've been to hell and back before, it's a terrible feeling but the light at the end of the tunnel is always bright. love ya |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hun it's really good and i understand why all it's such a dark poemremeber what i said i am always here for you! you have many ways to get in touch with me if you need someone to yell at or talk to. love ya bunches! robin i am me don't tell me different!! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"My future may be bright, but our past is dark as hell." First off.... thank you, to everyone, for your splendid replys. They mean a lot to me.  Right now, dealing with a lot... I have mood swings.... and at times... they get dark. Undetstandably, but... that's where the dark poetry comes from....This is by far one of my darkest... one I'm coming to love. What's interesting.... is... my favorite lines I might at... often get interpeted differently then I the poet originally planned. Let me show 'em again... My future may be bright, but our past is dark as hell. By dark as hell.... I'm reffering to the past being unseeing, unclear, unattainable. The past with all it's ups and downs, at times seems brighter then the present, yet it cannot be grasped... it's dark as hell, and no hand can reach it. Yet, the line was interpeted as saying the past was dark as hell.... which I easily and might have meant. Who knows? Just thought it was itneresting. ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, veiwing life in veiw of eternity. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"My future may be bright, but our past is dark as hell." Wow, this part really got to me. I love the way you did that. A definatly agreeable outlook on life, my friend. Well done. I am a rabid horse. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thank you Sky.  ~ Titus My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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