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December 23, 1999
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December 23, 1999 |
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crazymin83 Junior Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 49Mass |
Where are you? I wonder that every night I miss you. Ever since December 23,1999 I’ve missed you You were yellow and skinny Your cancer was killing you But I loved you When I’d come in your room You’d be sleeping I’d wonder what were you dreaming of? Dying? I wanted you to come home When you woke up You didn’t say much except give alittle smirk We’d talk I’d make you laugh you said that was a gift I was always good at that Your life ended earlier than you thought did You never got to see Christmas You never got to bring in the New Year with us But some how you did all that. Everyone has moved on without you I’ve learned how to walk more And take life more serious then us to Thank you dad for 16 years of your life with me Your smile would bring me to a higher level Your laughter would make me a better person Your hugs, kisses and everything I’ll always love Now I’ll graduate knowing you won’t get lost to my school But no matter where I go in life I’ll be carrying you in my heart Your charm I’ll always love you dad Minna March 15, 2002 "If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D" |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
This was really good, because I believe that once someone passes away they see everythign we do, I think that your father is smiling down at you, looking at you with the most pride a father can have. Great Write.. ~Lisa |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
This is beautiful and your father would be proud, he would have been looking down at you with every word of this you wrote. He would look down on you and guide you through life, God Bless you, Clare Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
If you feel him, you know he's still with you. I'm ready for death because I don't believe in it- John Lennon |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Aw. I know what it's like to loose someone. Best wishes. Great write. |
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crazymin83 Junior Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 49Mass |
Hey everyone, thanks for your reply's. "If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D" |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
ah, much along the lines of an unsent letter. i love unsent letters. /gwen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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