Teen Poetry #5 |
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Yesterday, i Fell |
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SlowDrag Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 53Tx...need i say more |
My life is falling in line no time to waste so busy wasting time. every time i turn around i see my past, chasing me down. Chorus: I run to you you run away i can't escape yesterday. i hold you close You push me away. you push me back to yesterday I run away, run away from the pain. no matter what i say it's always the same. I tried so hard to haven't tried at all. I set myself up just so i can fall. Chorus. Bridge: Yesterday, i knew i'd fall. Yesterday, I knew, i knew it all. yesterday, I knew, I knew i would fall. Chorus. "Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..." |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
This is one of the first songs posted here, that I actually could hear in my head. It was excellent, and I hope you can get back up when you fall... Lisa |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
I really agree with yopu lIsa, this is one of those written songs you can just hear in your head, and I think it sounds great!! ~*~Serena~*~ |
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SlowDrag Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 53Tx...need i say more |
thanks for your comments...i really want to know waht you think about this song, so keep them coming haha. i wrote this (just fyi) not as a personal thing, but just kinda my description of life in general, or at least certain aspects of it. like how we make choices taht we know are wrong and we know will stick to us, but we do it anyway, then in the future when we want everything to be normal again, our choices haunt us. and also about how everyone is looking for change, to move or start over or something, but when it finally happens, we realize taht the atmosphere is different, but it's all still the same as before. hah anyhow, thanks for the comments ![]() "Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..." |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was really really good!! Unfortunately life doesnt stop when we have a hard day to let us recoupe...but what r u gonna do ya kno? Ya jus gotta go on but its a great topic to put into a song like u've done!! GREAT JOB! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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