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Teen Poetry #5

Im holding the world up

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-03-14 10:45 PM

I'm holding the world on my shoulders
Carrying the pain, the hurt, the tears
I cant let my gaurd down, I cant fall
I cant let my mind give way to these fears
I'm the "strong" one, I can handle the pain
But it hurts so much deep inside
If I fall I bring them down with me
So I will succeed, or die when I try
And what if I dont make it?
Well then they will finally see
The pain, the hurt, the tears
That they have all caused on me

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-03-15 11:31 AM

Aww sweety...it is impossible to hold the world on your shoulders and have others happiness rely on you. Look at my quote..thats the first thing i thought of while reading this. I enjoyed this a lot..stay strong and remember that YOU come first

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-03-15 11:43 PM

please dont be mad....I want more than 1 respone...
*BUMP*

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
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3 posted 2002-03-16 01:15 AM

LoL hun you deserve more than one....**BUMP**

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-03-16 03:41 AM

*hugs* lisa sure you deserve more then one or two...

carrying the weight of the world on your tiny shoulders is not a welcomed thing by many...maybe you should try saying "NO" a little bit louder- just so all those little deaf maniacs who try to get you to do so many things or expect so much out of you can finally stop running you into the ground

...nice write as always lisa....continue

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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