Teen Poetry #5 |
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Im holding the world up |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I'm holding the world on my shoulders Carrying the pain, the hurt, the tears I cant let my gaurd down, I cant fall I cant let my mind give way to these fears I'm the "strong" one, I can handle the pain But it hurts so much deep inside If I fall I bring them down with me So I will succeed, or die when I try And what if I dont make it? Well then they will finally see The pain, the hurt, the tears That they have all caused on me |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww sweety...it is impossible to hold the world on your shoulders and have others happiness rely on you. Look at my quote..thats the first thing i thought of while reading this. I enjoyed this a lot..stay strong and remember that YOU come first ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
please dont be mad....I want more than 1 respone... *BUMP* |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LoL hun you deserve more than one....**BUMP** iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
*hugs* lisa sure you deserve more then one or two... ![]() carrying the weight of the world on your tiny shoulders is not a welcomed thing by many...maybe you should try saying "NO" a little bit louder- just so all those little deaf maniacs who try to get you to do so many things or expect so much out of you can finally stop running you into the ground ![]() ![]() Zombie |
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