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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Sitting Shocked amongst the shattered Pieces of my heart What was I thinking When I began To shred my soul into pieces Time lost Not quite sure Of the time When I began to tread Within my mind Dark and cold I sit alone Amongst the tiny pieces Of what used to be my soul Lost Dazed Confused Constantly kissing The potent poisionous feeling Of self-inflicted disappointment... |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow. You wrote this beautifully. I don't really know what to say, except that it was well-expressed, and I guess it hit home... |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Kristen....  ~ Titus  In My Mind's Eye, In My Mind's Eye... |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Hey Kris, As with you other poems, I can relate to this really really well, it hits hard! Great Write Lisa |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WHoa...strong piece!! I know exactly how you feel ::hugs:: iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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