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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-03-13 04:06 PM


Why,
everytime i get close,
I always get pushed away?

Why,
everytime I find love,
I never know what to say?

These are the questions,
I have in my head,
I never find the answers to.

These are the questions,
my heart is asking,
the answers I wish I knew.


~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (03-14-2002 10:44 AM).]

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LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-03-13 04:51 PM


These are the questions that will never get answered.  Why must we go through so much pain in our lives?  The answer may never be known...


Great Write

Lisa

Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

2 posted 2002-03-13 09:29 PM


Hey, I have to agree. Why? The poem was well-written and expressed. Hope you find some kind of suitable answer.

Kielo

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2002-03-14 04:42 AM


We all wish we knew the answers and hopefully one day you will find out yours!!! Good poem!!!

~It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
4 posted 2002-03-14 10:45 AM


thanx 4 the replies, i'm kinda going through a rough time right now so ur comments help a lot.  byes

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
5 posted 2002-03-14 08:54 PM


hey this is a good poem..mogo lol..i know how who this is bout. that was sooo gross..but neways great poem! lylan ~Jess

~*~Never take anything for granted~*~

Honey
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since 2001-10-09
Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada
6 posted 2002-03-14 11:42 PM


Oh my this was beautiful, it is being tucked away in my library, keep up the good work doll

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
7 posted 2002-03-15 11:40 AM


I wish you knew these things too, would make life much easier wouldnt it?? Ahh but thats one of the joys of life..not knowing why things happen the way they do...great poem!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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