Teen Poetry #5 |
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Only You |
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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
Alone at last dreaming of you. how i wish to be with you and never the less you wish to be away. your not near but not far and yet the burnig inside me grows stronger every day for your love. but knowing it may never be that love you have to give. never will i be able to hold you hold you in my arms and show the love i have to give. Only you are the one i love may it be somthing about you undiscribale that words cant say how i feel it hurts to know that i, i will never be complete Only you can complete me for i am waiting... |
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since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hmmm...this is well done! I liked it! And can relate to it on many levels! Thanks for sharing! Be sure to drop by more! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like it. It works for me! Thanks for the read! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwww this is so sweet corey.....but VERY wistfull too...and wistful poetry makes me sad. youre a great romance poet "jes like yer big brudder" ![]() ![]() Zombie |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing this poem, I really enjoyed reading such a great poem ![]() Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
hey cory, forgot the "e"...my fault.. nice poem, but not your best.. get some lesson from your brother. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It is so hard to sit around and wait for something you want so bad..but hopefully it'll all be worth your while. Great job! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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