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Over and Done |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
I look at the man I once did love, He stares back at me his eyes so cold, He was once as gentle as a dove Where’s the love he once did behold. Now he leaves me feeling blue Whenever he utters ‘I don’t love you’ I used to be his little pearl, But realise I’m just a modest school girl, I was considered fully-fledged And my whole heart I did pledge Just for my world to shatter like glass I waited for this feeling to pass But it still won’t leave I continue to grieve For the love lost, absent, forgotten, Non-existent. Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
All I can say is that the heart heals overtime, and we can all relate to you. Heart Break must be some sort of "right of passage" that we as teens go through...anyways...Great Poem... ~Lisa |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You're great for bringing back memories, you know? But that's okay, I like your work anyway! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwww clare, i can relate to this, but in different ways then i think you would. you wrote this extremely well, you can see the effort you put into this piece as well as the emotions too. i enjoyed it, although it did make me pweety sad too. nicely done, hope to be reading more from you  Zombie |
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