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Carly Maas
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 23
Garden City, MI, USA

0 posted 2002-03-11 05:38 PM


Why is this so confusing?
It's so hard for me,
To figure out your true feelings.

When we're alone,
You seem to care,
Sitting beside me,
Running your fingers through my hair.

When were not,
You seem to hide,
Sitting on the other side of the room,
Not letting me inside.

When were alone,
Sitting in your room,
You talk to me,
Telling me about your life,
and listening to me talk about mine.

When we're not,
You talk a lot of trash,
Doggin all the girls you know,
and talking about robbing your best friend.

You treat everyone the same,
No respect,
the guys,
Just another person to rob,
the girls,
Just another hoe.

But not me,
You treat me like you care,
You don't call me names to my face,
and you never raise your voice.

I'm afraid to fall in love with you,
I sometimes wonder if you dog me behind my back,
and wonder if you really don't care about me.

This is why I'm so confused,
I wish I knew how you really felt,
I don't want to fall in love with you,
Especially if I'm just another piece of ass.


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1 posted 2002-03-11 06:23 PM


Hmmm... definately a heartfelt poem here. If he dogs you, you don't need him, but you seem to already know that. *hugs* it's a hard decision to make; hope it gets easier for you

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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since 2002-02-20
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2 posted 2002-03-12 08:52 PM


Wow, what a beautiful poem!! I definatly liked it!! Nicely ended, good job!!
cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2002-03-13 04:25 AM


omg...confusions confusing confusions! i think we all get to the stage where we wonder about how close we really are to that someone special before we try to take things further. he seems to treat you well when youre alone...perhaps you should find out how he really feels when youre alone then? but then again, if he treats you like crap when youre with ppl then you should be a bit wary of him..undecided:...confusing situation....but nicely written as usual carly

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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