Teen Poetry #5 |
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Breath of life |
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laconic Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 64Melbourne, Australia |
My breath of life, gave me new insight to see through the lies before mine eyes my breath of life changed my world now i know how my lifes contured my breath of life became it all my breath of life, i give to ya'all The first philosophy spoken through word is release, where all is possible, nothing obsured the second that came is nothings the same, never compare, so your never compared always fix yourself, before the world you repair Philosophy three, learned from the days is that i debt is collected, but a favor repaid so never heed mind about being kind one who helps others is never behind and that leads us, to philosophy four the poor are the rich, and the rich are the poor to live in flith is to have a heart of gold through adversity we build oppertunity a truth rarely exposed and that concludes our session today so take out your lunches children go out and play. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
really nice i like much. i am me don't tell me different!! |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like it! Made me think. Thanks for the read! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"never compare, so your never compared" i didnt like that line...only cuz i know that even though you as a person wouldnt compare yourself to anything or anyone nor would you nessesarily compare anyone else to anyone or thing, other people will always compare you to them or them to you or someone else. but i liked the following line: "always fix yourself, before the world you repair" cuz i think that that is true...if you ARE going to compare, then you had better see that you're "fixed" before saying anything. i liked the read, im glad to know that there are ppl out there who do have their own philosophies to live by...i know i do ![]() Zombie |
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