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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Bitter fiend driven cold with a shaken stir all that life can give you take it in with a single breath all those who have forgave you and yet who stands beside you now? Forgiveness forgranted forged and left blank forsake your own morality for a piece of the temporary forsake yourself for a glimpse of infinity sell yourself for the inpiration of divinity disown your mind for a chance of to feel eternity and all the while sense this growing insecurity and who do you gain forgiveness from now when all to blame can stare back through glass when all youve done plays you the victim and wont pass when all you need dances on a stage out of your grasp displaying your deaf irony to the music of the tragedies you wish you could have fleeting inspiration desperation to grip time like a mad man clinch it in desolate dissonant beauty make the time to find yourself again through this maze of most delicate china that you weave this world from begging to maneuver through and out like a saint its in this graven image of ice that you carve your gods desolate crusader of winter for who do you fight for and for what will you die for and how can you claim allegiance when you know your self no more than that of a stranger maybe its time to ask for who do you carry this baggage for? in all your struggle, still nothing more than what we see you to be dispite your infinate infinity nothing more than what we can see you to be and that is the first note to the song of true ultimate irony ...With my feet up on the ground i lose myself between the sounds and open wide to suck it in i feel it move across my skin.... |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Im glad I "just read" it was an awesome poem! Great Write!!!!!! ~lisa |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Thank you, the title was derived simply because i am to lazy to thing of something flashy for the attention of it.. lol. .i am glad you took it light heartedly, i hope it doesnt offend. Thank you for enjoying what i have given.  |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Funny, I was just thinking about you not too long ago and here you are. Actually I wrote a poem about you, which I was fairly pleased with only to have someone else tell me it sucks. Don't you hate it when that happens? Anywho... I'm glad to see something from you again. AND YOU OWE ME A LETTER! You thought I forgot didn't you... didn't you! Wow, look at me taking up all this precious space. Back to the point... I really, really, really liked it. I'm too lazy to tell you why or to try and analyze anything for you  but just take my word for it. You know how rude I am... if it sucked I'd tell you.  I'll talk to you whenever. Love, Me  -- the calm before the storm -- |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
JAMSTERS! Thanks.. I know i owe you ... i have always owed you a letter. Nice seeing you again bwahahah. I hope i can write other things you can appreciate. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Paul you rule. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great piece!! Keep em coming! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Thank you all. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
forsake yourself for a glimpse of infinity sell yourself for the inpiration of divinity disown your mind for a chance of to feel eternity AMEN!!! *bows* im not stalking you or anything...but youre a friend of jaimies!...haha i KNEW there was something awesome about you again, a VERY VERY good piece here...im fast becoming a fan of your writing....post MORE damnit! Zombie |
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