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Cinderelly
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0 posted 2002-03-11 09:06 PM


M is for the many times you made me cry,
E is for the emptiness of not having you around,
M is for the days I spent missing you,
O is for obsessing over the past,
R is for the ringing of the phone I longed for,
I is for inkling of things to come,
E is for each and every day I wasted wishing things were different,
S is for the new start this may be . . .


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1 posted 2002-03-11 10:17 PM


Hey---very clever! Cool! Tres bien! Hmmm...t descrubs your feelings well...and yet it has an optimistic outlook!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

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2 posted 2002-03-12 02:09 PM


yeah it is very clever and so tru nice one, Clare x

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2002-03-13 04:47 AM


acrostics! ....i love teachin' em and definately READIN' em! this is really beautifully done...sad sentiments though, but nicely written nonetheless....i hope things are ok with you. i enjoyed this MUCHLY!

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

lauren03
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4 posted 2002-03-14 09:57 PM


hey, very good, soooo true. I know exactly how that feels and even now that i started new things are beginning to look down. but it's only guys no need to get all upset and stuff right? well i liked it alot, it says alot.
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5 posted 2002-03-15 11:27 AM


Ahhh an acrostic!! Havent seen one of those in a while Memories definately do spell out many different things Great job hun

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Erin
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6 posted 2002-03-19 01:27 AM


This was great!!! Good job!!! Move on its not worth being stuck in the past with just memories...Someone better will come around!!!

~It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe

ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
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7 posted 2002-03-19 01:33 AM


good job! i liked this one a lot........
Erin
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8 posted 2002-03-19 01:47 AM


Sorry i wanted to add this to my library and it wouldnt let me cause I already pressed submit!

~If love isn't a game, why are there so many players?~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (03-19-2002 01:47 AM).]

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