Teen Poetry #5 |
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Memories |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
M is for the many times you made me cry, E is for the emptiness of not having you around, M is for the days I spent missing you, O is for obsessing over the past, R is for the ringing of the phone I longed for, I is for inkling of things to come, E is for each and every day I wasted wishing things were different, S is for the new start this may be . . . |
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since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hey---very clever! Cool! Tres bien! Hmmm...t descrubs your feelings well...and yet it has an optimistic outlook! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
yeah it is very clever and so tru nice one, Clare x Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
acrostics! ![]() Zombie |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
hey, very good, soooo true. I know exactly how that feels and even now that i started new things are beginning to look down. but it's only guys no need to get all upset and stuff right? well i liked it alot, it says alot. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ahhh an acrostic!! Havent seen one of those in a while ![]() ![]() ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was great!!! Good job!!! Move on its not worth being stuck in the past with just memories...Someone better will come around!!! ~It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe |
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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 36im a louisiana cajun princess! lol |
good job! i liked this one a lot........ ![]() |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sorry i wanted to add this to my library and it wouldnt let me cause I already pressed submit! ~If love isn't a game, why are there so many players?~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (03-19-2002 01:47 AM).] |
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