Teen Poetry #5 |
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The love between friends |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
I love you are three simple words, which can have so many interpretations, as a lover, as a friend, as a parent or relative. In the past when I said these words I was so in love with you my every waking moment was spent thinking, dreaming and wanting you. Now when I say these words I still mean them, I love everything about you but I’m not in love with you. I feel we have a connection a bond which I hope won’t break and this is our friendship, I spend time thinking of you and waiting for the moment you will fill the gap you leave when we part. Even through everything all the pain and misunderstandings I feel that you could be the best friend I ever could have and I hope the underlying love will always be there. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Wow... This is AWESOME! I showed this to my friend, and we both were like, "This is SOOOO US!" It's like as if you were writing about our friendship. This was an awesome poem, and you did a great job on it. It's definitely going to my library. Thanks for posting this! - Cody - |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a really great poem..ur right, love can be interpreted many different ways...nicely done ![]() mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem a lot and thought you wrote it well. Hope to see more. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
This is such a great description of friendship and the strength between two close friends. Very nicely written. Beautiful poem ![]() The day you were born, you were born free |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is very well thought out...i can relate to this in more ways then one...beautiful work...keep posting! ![]() Zombie |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
you know it's true i love you are the most powerful words in the world. some mortals like to abuse them or even use them but you need to take the powers of love in your own hands and learn to control it no body eles can but you. god gave you a heart and soul and that is the most wonderful givt you can ever ask for. you do have the hear and soul please don't hide show it to the world. the wrold needs to see it even your self. love kevin reid aka dunphy 18 m mass. |
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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 36im a louisiana cajun princess! lol |
i love this.......truly wonderful. almost makes me cry though, me and my best friend are drifting...... 6 long years of friendship probably about to end it seems. but i love the poem, its great! |
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