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Teen Poetry #5

Time

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-03-10 09:57 PM

Time escapes from our hands inadvertently.
Hands of time cannot be reversed,
But they leave us a sense of eternity
Like three dots at the end of a verse...

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-03-10 10:24 PM

yes, I like this...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-03-10 11:24 PM

Great job!!!! Time...absolutely amazing thing!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-03-12 07:07 PM

Thank you for sharing this wonderful peice of poetry, I really enjoyed the read.

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-03-13 04:32 AM

thoughtful piece Andrey, perhaps there could have been more...?

its nice to see you posting here again, and thanks for the link, ill check it out sometime

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2002-03-20 12:21 PM

hi,
i think that this is a really good piece. it is so short, yet it still manages to make the reader think. thank you for sharing this, i can't wait to read more from you.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

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