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Teen Poetry #5

miss you

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2002-03-09 05:08 PM

Miss you

i miss you bunches
wish you were here

i left last night, seems
like it has been a year

i thought going to the beach
would make me cheer

i now know why im sad
it is now so clear

i dont want you to find
someone else, i fear

i think the friendship
we have is so dear

i thought of someone else in
my place it made me tear

i wish we were together now
sitting on this peir

once again
i wish you were here

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-03-09 09:27 PM

*hugs* I know the feeling, hun! Excellent write!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2002-03-09 11:38 PM

I know this feeling too. It's horrible. Nice poem, hope things get better.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-10 11:22 PM

I def know the feeling....::Shivvers:: i just cant handle it!! You expressed yourself well and i hope your friendship with this person is always held dear to both of you

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-03-11 12:36 PM

if it is meant to be it will be....I liked this a lot

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