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inspiredpoetwriter
Member

since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-03-06 06:04 PM

:( :(
This poem is bout a friend of mine who i love n care bout alot he did sumfin i didnt n dont like at all he was in dis basement smoking pot i know he was n it hurt me alike tho i didnt ask or talk to him bout it i didnt wona b hurt more u know...mayb it dumb to b mad at or b hurt by wat ya'll think..???
Untitled???

He took a knife and stabbed
My heart to make it bleed
Make it fall apart.

I cry with sadness and
Eagerness in my soul
These tears that fall will
Never go.

He's hurt me
Bad and doesn't know.

BY: AnGz

need's title...

:( :(

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-03-06 09:22 PM

A once read a quote :"True friends stab you in th front..." Where did this knife go....

Great Write

~Lisa

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2002-03-06 11:31 PM

Great piece I really like it and I know where your coming from.
Lauren

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2002-03-07 05:35 AM

Its not a stupid reason to be mad at someone. He should just know that you are trying to look out for him. If he takes it differently ohh well at least you tried!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (03-07-2002 05:47 AM).]

Dark Avenger
New Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 3
Darkness

4 posted 2002-03-07 07:25 AM

It's saddening when a close friend hurts you, hope you are ok

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-03-10 11:40 PM

ive been hurt bad before and not have the person know...nicely written poem..you expressed your pain well ::hugs::

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-03-11 01:57 AM

title? unknown pain

as for your feelings being justified??? YES THEY ARE!!!You have a right to be angry at someone you love for doing something that will HURT them! I think you should tell him that that is something you simply cannot be a part of, and don't want to be around...that you cannot be a part of him hurting himself that way. (ok that was from a grown up point of view...just tell him you don't like it and to keep that away from you. ) *hugs* of understanding this too well from all the angles

[This message has been edited by SEA (03-11-2002 01:58 AM).]

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