Teen Poetry #5 |
Glass of Faith |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Milky sweet To cover the bitter taste Lingering within your mouth Go ahead Take a sip And make a wish With your heart With your soul And you'll be amazed How well Your life will go Only if you're willing To drink from The glass of faith That has been sitting there All this time Right before your very own face... |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Ok, I waited an hour, and still I am the first to respond....Its very good Kris, maybe things might be looking up? Possibly? Have you gulped down your glass of faith today??? ~Lisa |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hey, Kris! This poem is cool! All philosophical and such! ^_^ I liked it! I think some are afraid to drink from this glass...because it means alot of change. I know that drinking from that glass before, has hurt me very dearly. And I'm kinda afraid to "have faith" again! Tres Bien! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I love the words Milky Sweet. I'm reminded of foods I haven't eaten in a long time when I read that. Short but sweet. Like Alex said, philosophical with some good ideas in there. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ ::Most people never listen:: |
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-Queth- Junior Member
since 2002-02-10
Posts 35Canada |
Faith is a part of us that makes us who we are. The way you portrayed faith in this piece makes me feel like a glass of milk...hehe. But! No more nonsense. -nods- This is quite the philosophical piece! -steals everyone else's previous comments- I enjoyed this muchly! Q.u.e.t.h. Everything in between. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was a very cool piece. A think piece, I guess. It was something I definately needed to see. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
Ah what faith.... ~Time you enjoy wasting was not wasted.~ John Lennon |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Faith is such a strong thing and so detremental to our lifes if we dont have it. Great job !! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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