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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-03-05 07:28 PM

Hrm...This is weird again I don't like the last lines...

I'm the reflection
Within the depths of your soul
I'm the memory
That is sometimes hard to let go
I'm that smile
Upon your face
And the pain
That time cannot erase
I'm even the one
You still cry about
And the tears
That rip your world apart
I'm the dancing shadows
Flirting within your mind
I'm even the kiss
That you replay a hundred thousand times
I'm even the dream
That haunts you constantly
You might try
To run
And leave it all well behind
But in the end
It's me you will always find...

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-03-05 07:37 PM

I refuse to say my opinion until someone else replys...

(whats that...an invisable reply! ok)

Great Job Kris....I liked this because it seemed to me that you were kind of "harnessing" your pain and using it to write powerful stuff....(either that or I am totally wrong...which is normal....)

~Lisa

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2002-03-05 07:39 PM

Weirdo:P *shrugs* I'm not saying that you are wrong or that you are right..lol Im confuzzled..anyways hrm..email,dearie? whats up wif it? here if you get this it's [email protected] have I been getting yours wrong..hahah end this madness!!!:P

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-03-05 07:46 PM

You act as though people on this site are normal....! I just got your newest email today and replied, maybe its just taking a really long time....hmmmm~ Did you get my first one???

and because this is your poems post...

Great Write!

~Lisa

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2002-03-05 07:51 PM

Thanks and uhh no...but Im really glad you liked it

perhaps I'll sleep on it and get back to you in the morning to what it really meant..lol

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2002-03-05 09:49 PM

Ceinwyn~
This is a really great piece! The end is good but it seems like its drifting away from the poem. Like it shouldnt be there. But I do like it! I always love your work, its like an addiction!! Thanks for sharing this piece!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada