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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2002-03-06 12:20 PM

i try and try to please you
but i don't know what to do
you are so complicated
and you always make me the fool
well i give up
it's not my problem anymore
and maybe you should figure out
what you want in life
otherwise just leave me the hell alone
because i am so sick of people
and all of their stupid lies
i wish i could simply find someone to love
whom i didn't grow to despise

-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2002-03-06 05:11 AM

Great poem!!! Good for you for realizing its not your problem...I know exactly what it was like trying to please someone, feeling good that im trying only to have that person make everything worse...Like I never tried in the beginning!!! Thanks for sharing this piece!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2002-03-06 02:34 PM

Awsome piece i love it.
Lauren

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-03-06 02:44 PM

You wrote this very well, it showed what you feel....good job...

~LCBS

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

4 posted 2002-03-06 11:18 PM

Wow...i wish i'd read this a year ago...i was going through then what ur talking about here...it was perfectly written and i love the frustration and emotion...excellent job

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-03-07 11:44 AM

Awesome poem....get that anger out hun!!!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

6 posted 2002-03-08 10:11 AM

Yes! You should get that anger out---just channel it into something productive, alright? Lol, and if you ever feel like climbing a clock tower with an uzi---mail me, alright?

Nicely done! ^_^

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

7 posted 2002-03-08 12:10 PM

great piece! I luv it!
-Joe

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

8 posted 2002-03-09 12:10 PM

A big BOOYA is coming your way. You're asserting power which is always nice to read instead of the usual "He/She doesn't love me anymore *sigh*".

Sorry to see this person hurt you so badly. If they hurt you, they're not worth a thing.

Thanks for sharing and take care of yourself.

~AF~

::Most people never listen::
Ernest Hemingway

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