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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
when you are down to your last breath only then will you see how much you missed by using me happy days and happy nights are replaced by hazy parties filled with morbid delight smiling faces morph into smirking gazes and cruel minds. maybe you could have been dancing floating across the floor but you chose the easy road and closed happiness' open door afterwards you think this life ain't so easy anymore -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I like that...not much more I can say..without the words..very well done. "Water Over Matter" |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yet again we never know what we have until its gone...  Nicely done!iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Great post, its true, sometimes this goes through my head a lot, and I'm glad that you could put it into words ~LCBS |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Exactly!! uhh heheh that means it was good, I really liked it.. Kristen |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I like this! I dont know what it is but the whole poem sums up alot on my mind and what I am doing and I wish I knew why! Thanks for sharing!!! ~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~ |
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