Teen Poetry #5 |
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Don't tell me what I already know |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Dont tell me what I already know, as you stand there anticipating what I may or may not believe, about a dream, or a lie, or a foolish mistake. Don't tell me what I already know, gathering information and accumilating my deepest wish, or my darkest secret, or a worthy promise. Don't tell me what I already know, as you sit there listening, for a key to my tales, about my work, or my love or my life. Tell me something that I want to hear, like a quote, or a fact, or a phrase, feed my imagination, with something I've never heard. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Wow, I like this one too, in fact, there's not much here at passions I haven't liked, but your work is always great. thx for the read. Rich Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
way to go kim..*applauds* this one was really kickin ![]() Eternal agony, invisions of carnage, needles stabbing you in the eye, this is what its like when doves cry |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
oooooooooooooh this is really good! its just the thing i need to tell a few annoying ppl about conversing with me when im feeling a bit down!..i liked this one a lot thanks kim! i thought that this was a nice change of poetry content- i enjoyed it lots! ![]() ![]() ![]() Daffodils |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Very good! Loved the end... it's true that you need something out of the ordinary to feed an imagination... Great post, ALLIE |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I liked how you wrote this one. I connected with it. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
OOooo Awesome! I feel you toatlly on this one. Thats it! Grr! I'm a fan! haha You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Thankyou all for your feedback, I haven't been on the site for a while but I appreciate all the posts which I have gathered over the past few months and I will do my best to keep posting! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ ![]() "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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