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Teen Poetry #5

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ForeverMyOwn
Junior Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 13
Brighton, MI

0 posted 2002-03-03 06:30 PM

Who are you?
Where are you from?
What do you do?
And why did you come?

Questions I hate,
answers I can't find,
but popularity rates,
who cares about your mind?

I live in the void,
while I search around my mind.
You say I'm paranoid,
cause of memories I cant find.

Who are you?
Where are you from?
What do you do?
And why did you come?

Can i ever see,
Will i ever know,
what will my future be,
if the river breaks my row.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2002-03-03 06:46 PM

Wow, I really enjoyed the read, I love the repetition of the question stanza it really made my day to read something a little different.

If you see this message I have just replied to your poem. I have poems as well *hint*

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2002-03-03 07:29 PM

Such questions...if you find an answer you're lucky. Not a lot of us do.

It read through well but I think you could expand on the idea a bit more. Maybe make the stanzas longer or something. *shrugs*

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

::Most people never listen::
Ernest Hemingway

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-03 09:53 PM

Great questions you've got here...hope you find your answers...

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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