Teen Poetry #5 |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl ![]() |
Nearly twenty years and still no idea the sun rises each day and disappears in the dark but that's all I knew for certain -until him- Now the whole world begins to make sense and I know what I'm here for and I know where to go. His beauty expressed in every flower that opens- and in the rain that comes down in the summer. The love in my heart, always blooms greater with the end of each day when the sun disappears in the dark. Afterthought: Well I realize this is a bit ambiguous in meaning but where would the fun be if I told you what I wrote it about. Tell me what you got from it. ![]() [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (02-27-2002 08:49 AM).] |
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hopeful Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27 |
I like this poem. very well written. I like how it is open to many different views for people to see it in. It could be seen in a way of talking about a boyfriend, or even just a friend, maybe a long lost loved one. depending on how people wanted to view it. keep up the good work. "Be careful who you fall for there never who you think they are" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
i dunno..as soon as i saw the title i thought that this poem belonged in Spiritual, you write this as though youre talking about god, but then again it DOES seem like youre talking about a guy. you COULD be equating this guy with "godliness"...thats MY safest bet ![]() good poem jenn...its nice seeing you happy ![]() Zombie |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem Jenn, thank you for sharing it with us. I thought you were talking about a guy but I can see how it could be god or whatever. A very nice read ![]() See this through and leave my friend, the tears will come and I will end. |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I wrote this with regards to my boyfriend...but somehow everything I write about him seems religious after I put it to paper. Like...I guess thats a good thing... ![]() thanks for the replies.... ![]() love you guys jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sometimes we meet people who can bring a whole new meaning and direction to our life ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
EwwWWwwwWWWwww....love... ![]() Nah just kidding, Jenndaline. 'tis a sweet piece and you should show this to your Mister Man. He'd be flattered...or if you're not with him, he might charge you with stalking and get a restraining order out against you. ![]() There are some really nice images in here and the symbolism rocks. Very nicely done. Be proud. ~AF~ ::Most people never listen:: |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This one could definately be taken either way. But either way I liked it. I would write more but I have to go Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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