Teen Poetry #5 |
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Crash Landed |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Droplets in my eyes, They’re cold and wet. I thought our love was great, I thought our dreams were set. But we’re over now, Our love has died. I called you so many times, And so many more times I cried. I wonder what you’re doing, I wonder where you are. At one time we were so close, Now you seem distant, so far. Our love once soared, Then it took a nose dive. It crashed to the ground, Never again to be alive. ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
I know exactly who dis is bout..dont worry hun its gonna be fok!! You got someone you love and care about now and he's really worth it! Not like the other one which he definetely isn't!! Believe me good write! love ya much ~Jess ![]() ![]() ![]() ~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~ |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
ooo this is a tough situation, but the most important thing to do is pick up the pieces and continue forward ![]() **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
i can really relate, im going through this at the moment but luckily i am starting to see a light at the end of the tunnel, its just taken alot of time. great post. luv Clare Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Great job, very emotional, I liked it... ~LCBS |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im so sorry to hear about your relationship. This was a great poem..you expressed urself nicely iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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