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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-02-21 06:15 PM


Droplets in my eyes,
They’re cold and wet.
I thought our love was great,
I thought our dreams were set.
But we’re over now,
Our love has died.
I called you so many times,
And so many more times I cried.
I wonder what you’re doing,
I wonder where you are.
At one time we were so close,
Now you seem distant, so far.
Our love once soared,
Then it took a nose dive.
It crashed to the ground,
Never again to be alive.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2002-02-21 07:41 PM


I know exactly who dis is bout..dont worry hun its gonna be fok!! You got someone you love and care about now and he's really worth it! Not like the other one which he definetely isn't!! Believe me good write! love ya much ~Jess

~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~

DancinQueen
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2 posted 2002-03-05 12:10 PM


ooo this is a tough situation, but the most important thing to do is pick up the pieces and continue forward great post..

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

See me?
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 93
UK
3 posted 2002-03-05 02:56 PM


i can really relate, im going through this at the moment but luckily i am starting to see a light at the end of the tunnel, its just taken alot of time. great post. luv Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
4 posted 2002-03-05 03:24 PM


Great job, very emotional, I liked it...

~LCBS

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2002-03-05 05:07 PM


Im so sorry to hear about your relationship. This was a great poem..you expressed urself nicely

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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