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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-27 06:26 AM


Fighting...

Please tell why this is happened
How come everything went wrong
We used to be so happy
But now fighting nights grow so long

We used to work together
Everything shared and cared as well
But all that has quickly changed
Night after night the fighting does dwell

I’m pretty sure I still love you
After these 20mths or more
And you say you love me too
But only hate is what I saw

It seems like we’re enemies
Fighting against each other all the time
You say I've got your heart
But I think you're losing mine

I don’t want things to end forever
And I don’t want the fights to stay
We’ve left our problems for way too long
We’ll improve, we’ll find a way


* Me and my boy have hit a few bumps in the road (thats an understatement), and its just been getting us both down so much that we've become enemies towards each other! it sux so bad... if anyone has any advice about anything that might help us throught this tough time, or even if we should break up? Please let me know!!!! Thanks!
Love Jo
xoxo


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



© Copyright 2002 Jo - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2002-02-27 06:59 AM


Well look who it is!!! I havent read a poem by you in a very long time...Great work!!!

But no one could tell you what to do...Let the situation take its own path. If you think that you can work this out good for you...Spending almost 2 years with someone is a long time. But some things just need a change...Think about what you would be losing and about what you would be gaining out of this...Make your own choices dont let anyone tell you what you should do...Its not them its you...

Good Luck!!! And stay around here for a bit!!!


~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-27-2002 07:00 AM).]

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2002-02-28 04:13 AM


woah!...seems like life HAS been rough for you. but you havent lost all hope i see...hold onto that...if you really want it to happen, it will

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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