Teen Poetry #5 |
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hopeful Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27 |
This is a poem I had started about a year ago but never finished I posted the first part and now I'll post the whole thing They say the best relationships start from the best friendships Yet I will never be able to show you what they mean by that For no matter how hard I've tried you've never let me constantly you push me away Saying you want us to be But always stopping before we can We laught, we have fun, we enjoy each other Yet you run, you hide when the subject of we approach You say you want us but you flee when the chance comes your way You don't really want me, yet you don't want anyone else to have me either |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I thought it made a great poem jus the way it is ![]() ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow..this hit close to home!...alls i can say is that i can really relate to this...thanks for sharing! Zombie |
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