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hopeful
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0 posted 2002-02-26 09:36 AM


This is a poem I had started about a year ago but never finished I posted the first part and now I'll post the whole thing

They say the best relationships start from the best friendships
Yet I will never be able to show you what they mean by that
For no matter how hard I've tried you've never let me
constantly you push me away
Saying you want us to be
But always stopping before we can
We laught, we have fun, we enjoy each other
Yet you run, you hide when the subject of we approach
You say you want us but you flee when the chance comes your way
You don't really want me, yet you don't want anyone else to have me either


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1 posted 2002-02-26 11:29 AM


I thought it made a great poem jus the way it is I enjoyed this a lot...been in a similiar situation myself..thanks for sharing Hope you get to finish it one day

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2002-02-28 04:17 AM


wow..this hit close to home!...alls i can say is that i can really relate to this...thanks for sharing!

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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