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hopeful
Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27


0 posted 2002-02-25 06:21 PM


Memories of you filling my mind
vision bluring as i lose control of the world
things w/ you not here were smooth
then i gave in to temptation
now i'm confused like before
not know if your real this time
not knowing if you see me the way i'm seeing you
memories flooding my thoughts
i  can't seem to take control
why is it only you that sends my world out of orbit
life going smooth and no confusion to worry about
nothing to fret over
then you try to enter my life after being blocked for so long
unable to resist it i let you in
now as before i don't know what to do

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FoxXena
Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
1 posted 2002-02-25 06:25 PM


Remember the romance has been the themes of many songs...think I'll go ask my ex out again...

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2002-02-28 04:10 AM


cute....very cute...i think ive felt like this on more then one occasion ..nice write

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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