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sad brown eyes
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since 2001-12-14
Posts 19
Connecticut U.S

0 posted 2002-02-26 09:26 AM


I sacerfice so much never get anything back.
Why is that?
Im always the one that gives upeverything.
Is that how its suppost to be?
Told him maybe this shouldnt be.
I feel empty.
But he gets angry and asks me really?
Im tired of all the sacerfices and dreaming.
Im tired of being the one losing everything.
Told him maybe we should take a break and not be so clingy.
But he gotreally pissy.
I dontknow what i want anymore.
I dont know how i feel.
Sometimes i wonder what the deal
He has never slept with me but he dreams and tells it to me.
I wonder if thats all he wants.
Just to screw me.
Sometimes i hear this or hetells it to me.
I wonder if thatsall he wants just to screw me.
Sometiems i hear thisor he tells it to me, and it drives me crazy.
What about me?
Does hecareabout my feelings?
Is his love jsut about sleeping with me?
If it is then he's goin to be sorry.
Trust me.
He wont like me.
I would cause him so much pain and misery.
Just cuzall he wanted was to get inside my pantys.


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hopeful
Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27

1 posted 2002-02-26 09:46 AM


Hey, this poem was really good. I felt alot of what you were saying. I've been in a simular situation and I've had a couple of friends in this situation. If you are really going threw this right now my advice to you is not to worry about him getting mad or upset and get out of the relationship. and whatever you do don't give in to him.
cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2002-02-28 04:20 AM


...if thats all he wants then dump him already!...guys should make you feel cheap, even if they ARE your boyfriend.

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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