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Teen Poetry #5

When

hopeful
Junior Member

since 2000-04-19

Posts 27

0 posted 2002-02-26 08:22 AM

When sky's are livid
when the sea's are blurred
When nothings on track
And all I do is cry
When I can't escape the pain
and only hear yelling
You come to my rescue
As long as you can you stay
by my side, holding my hand
conviencing me it will be alright
telling me how wonderful I am
trying to build me up knowing I'll be torn down only again
Giving me hope to caryy on
Being my angel to guide me along

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-02-26 11:32 AM

Its so great to have people in your life who can act like your angel on earth...

Ur lucky to have them!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2002-02-28 04:15 AM

this is really sweet, friends like that are hard to come by, so hold on tight! lovely write

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-03-01 05:50 PM

hopeful-
Very nicely said.
I'm glad you have someone like this in your life.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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