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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-02-28 07:52 PM

I'm such in a foul mood right now *sigh* I'm so about to explode right now..so here are my words reflecting upon how I feel right now but I know it'll blow away eventually and I'll believe in love again because I'm *sigh* a hopeless romantic...

Time to throw
Away the fantasies
Of White Knights
And valant tales
Of King Arthur

Time to grow up
And throw away
The naive thoughts of love
I used to hold so dear
As I would long
For someone to be near

I need to get over
This hopeful bliss
And stop dreaming
Of my true love's kiss
It's just getting me nowhere

My eyes are misted
Over by illusions
And breeches of trust
Never is it love
Always turns out to be just mere lust
Well Atleast on their part...

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-28 08:24 PM

Hey Kris,

Never give up your dreams, because you never know when your knight in shining armor will appear *coughs...* and who cares about gowing up, it just brings responsibilty and pain.....

Wait Kris, email me, and tell me that things havent gone bad...Itll break my faith in love
~Lisa

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

[This message has been edited by LCBS (02-28-2002 08:45 PM).]

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

2 posted 2002-02-28 08:40 PM

HUNNY! I know EXACTLY how you're feeling.
It's hard to believe in love after its gone sour for you...I think we're in the same boat right now. But you're right it will blow over...Im patiently waiting for that day to come!
Take care and keep writing

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

3 posted 2002-02-28 11:57 PM

I'm in the boat with you and Jenabou...its hard to be disillusioned of our ideas of love, not to mention more than a little confusing...great job describing that here.

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-03-01 07:04 PM

Kristen!

Never give up on love, my dear! Otherwise, who will be there for love's sake?

Loved these lines in particular:

I need to get over
This hopeful bliss
And stop dreaming
Of my true love's kiss

A well written poem, showing your pain, and suffereing, from those that abuse love. Great emotion shows through here... Splendid.

~ Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

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