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SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10
Posts 53
Tx...need i say more

0 posted 2002-02-25 02:39 PM


hah, i wrote this for a really good friend of mine who is going to college in california next year, while i stay in texas   haha...it doens't really mean anything...she wanted a song so here it is.

by the way..this is an upbeat punk song..(that's usually about all i write).

Jessica...
I've been thinkin
maybe we could chat sometime.
I know you dont know me
but i've been watchin...
from the corner of my eye...

sometimes i think that i see you,
wonderin down the street
as i wait for the stop sign
to turn from red to green
but it's someon else i find..
Jessica again was on my mind.

Jessica...
i just realized
i may not see you again
so i thought i'd tell you
just how i felt
all my feelings i'll proclaim

sometimes i think that hear you
breathin as i sleep
halfway between dreaming
i turn over to see
but there's no one there i find..
Jessica is alwyas on my mind.......


SOmeitmes i wish i'd forget you
so i could get some sleep
and i just get on wiht my life
for now feelings remain
i'll just keep them locked inside
jessica you're always on my mind...



"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

[This message has been edited by SlowDrag (02-25-2002 04:29 PM).]

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FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
1 posted 2002-02-25 06:21 PM


Hey...I felt the same way when my dad died...there were some things that I wanted to tell him, but had escaped my mind...(a lot of stuff does)

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10
Posts 53
Tx...need i say more
2 posted 2002-02-25 07:05 PM


LOL...i'm really sorry to hear about your dad...
but that was completely irreleveant to my song...the song is about liking a girl who doesn't even know me....and it's completely fictional as well.
well i really hope you enjoyed it and thanks for your comments

"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10
Posts 53
Tx...need i say more
3 posted 2002-02-25 07:07 PM


LOL...i'm really sorry to hear about your dad...
but that was completely irreleveant to my song...the song is about liking a girl who doesn't even know me....and it's completely fictional as well.
well i really hope you enjoyed it and thanks for your comments

"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2002-02-25 07:24 PM


I know how this feels. Well, I did when I was a bit younger. Anyhow, I liked it. Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2002-02-28 05:09 AM


awwwwwwww...this is very cute...college does bring along other "jessica"s mind you ...i  enjoyed the read

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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