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hopeful
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 27


0 posted 2002-02-24 10:55 PM


Torn in two
never knowing what to do
I love him
but all I want is you
why can’t i seem to get things straight
loving him wanting you
this can’t be the way of life
there’s gotta be an easier way to deal
you treat me with respect
he treats me with hate
why can’t i get away
i’ve got you after  two years
why can’t i escape
says he loves me
as you show you love me
why can’t i get away
what is there to be done
is there really something there
or am i seeing it again as i’ve done in the past
is there something with us to risk my relationship
or should i stay with him and us be friends
anything for you w/o a grudge
something for him while going in sane


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
1 posted 2002-02-25 10:09 AM


What a difficult situation you've got here...hope all works out..::hugs::

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

sad brown eyes
Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19
Connecticut U.S
2 posted 2002-02-25 01:50 PM


ur poem relates to me alot. Im having that problem right now where im loving 2 guys but wanting to be with one and dont know why im not leaving the other
Raven Skye
Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112
.In a House.
3 posted 2002-02-25 02:33 PM


I love this... so many people go through this nowadays. Nice topic and very good poem!

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

LCBS
Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
4 posted 2002-02-25 03:00 PM


Great poem...

I wish I had two guys to love me...count your blessings...

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2002-02-28 05:19 AM


woah...thisis a toughie...i guess only you can tell who you really like deep down inside...thanks for sharing

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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