Teen Poetry #5 |
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Why... |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
Why... Why... do we comprimise, pain for pleasure? Why... Do we hurt the ones we love the most, if we love them the most? Why... Do they hurt us, if they love us so much? Why... Do we chase the pleasure of love, for the pain we recieve in return. ...Is love really worth that pain, when in the end... ...that's all you're going to have...? "I'm not afraid of anything in this world, There's nothing you can throw at me, that I haven't already heard" |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
Boy, wouldn't we all like to know the answers... I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.' |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ditto on what gracianna said...i'd love to know the answers too..very good questions hun..hope you find your answers one day iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Although I do not always take my own advice, I believe that some questions cannot be answered. Maybe this is to torture youngs adults, maybe it is to help us keep faith in certain things, or maybe its because the answers are too painful to be said.... ~LCBS Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
Very true, all of you. I'd like to know the answer to these questions myself, but I guess one day we might know. Though here's a bit of insight... We chase the feelings that love brings us at the very moment, how our hearts beat a little faster, or how our stomaches do flip-flops when that special someone walks in the room, it's that feeling of closeness and affection that makes us chase the emotion known as love. Anyways, thanx for the replies! ![]() "I'm not afraid of anything in this world, |
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Android 17![]() ![]()
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Serena, this is wonderful. But, you and I both know that we have yet to find the answer. Beautifully written---I enjoyed this...although, it was kinda on the short side; Even the good things in life must draw to a close I guess... Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Serena ![]() Questions and answers we'll have throughout all our lives.... poetry is one way of calming the chaos. Wonderfully done! A different style, but you handle it well. ![]() Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
Well, I wrote this poem a fe months back, oh wait... It's almost been a year. I guess I'll go over it and revise it. Thanx for the pointers!! I really appreciate it. "I'm not afraid of anything in this world, |
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