HUNGER STRIKES!!!!!!! (lol)

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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-02-17 05:41 PM

i jsut got vary hungry when i was wirting. it's a littler than what i normaly wright so i thought you might like to see it

it's right behind you whatch out
but once agian i'm to late

right there in the bushes
no that was his fate

nnooooo not him
thats my brother

how could you do this
thats my mother

your sick
you took all my firends

it'll get you all
when hunger strikes agian

Thank you for your time

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

[This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (02-17-2002 05:43 PM).]

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

1 posted 2002-02-18 03:28 PM

cool...I like it.

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

babygurl *
Junior Member

since 2001-12-07

Posts 30

2 posted 2002-02-18 07:32 PM

pretty good! i liked it!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2002-02-21 11:45 PM

...pardon my ignorance, but I didn't get it. What is the meaning behind all of this? Can you help me figure this out?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

4 posted 2002-02-22 03:43 AM

first whay dopey haven't seen you in a while i don't know if you rememder the names litle_krazy_poet and mikeykrazy well anyway i'm back and for a long time this time well hope to see you around and to read you new poetry well see ya

i'm not really shure what this poem means i was just wrighting a story and i got hungry and i jotted this down when i was eating

Thank you for your time

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

[This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (02-22-2002 03:45 AM).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2002-02-25 07:28 PM

Oh yeah, I remember you

Well thanks for the explanation
Nice to see you posting poetry still.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-02-26 05:18 PM

LoL... different.

But an enjoyable read.

Dopes, thanks for showing me this smiley. I never knew we had it!

Sincerely,
Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

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