Everyone Gets A Second Chance?

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Teen Poetry #5

Everyone Gets A Second Chance?

luckyducky_505
Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2002-02-24 04:53 PM

Does everyone deserve a second chance?

Should everyone be dropped to that level?
W
hy do I drop to the level to give you a second chance when I know how you are?

Why do I give you a second chance after you dropped me on my birthday?

I will never learn, I don't supposse.
I guess I'll live and learn,
but 'til then I will never heal!

---- not my greatest work but it's my feelings -----

If you wanna be somebody, If you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake-up and pay attention. ~Sister Act 2~
~Whoopi Goldberg~

Android 18
Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 61
Austrailia (My DreamLand)

1 posted 2002-02-24 10:24 PM

You may not think it's your best work, but to me it sounds all to familiar. I guess you could revise it and change a few things around, but the general idea gets through.

~Serena

"I'm not afraid of anything in this world, There's nothing you can throw at me, that I haven't already heard"

Android 18
Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 61
Austrailia (My DreamLand)

2 posted 2002-02-24 10:24 PM

You may not think it's your best work, but to me it sounds all to familiar. I guess you could revise it and change a few things around, but the general idea gets through.

~Serena

"I'm not afraid of anything in this world, There's nothing you can throw at me, that I haven't already heard"

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