Teen Poetry #5 |
You Picked Her Over Me |
krystlebabe19 Junior Member
since 2001-11-09
Posts 27 |
You Picked Her Why wasn't I good enough howcome I could never don anything right Why wasn't I the one you wanted, to be with at night Why did you tell me you loved me, if you were only gonna lye and break my heart Why did are realtionship have, to fall apart Why did you start coming home late Howcome we stopped going on dates Why was I last on your mind, when you came first in my heart What happened to us Why did she have to pull us apart? ~Krystle |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Krystle, Are you in my head? Are you living my life? Thanks for putting into words I can never seem to say. Dawn |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
KB...why is the world full of the wrong kinds of ppl? *sigh*..i felt your frustration in this loud and clear. thanks for sharing.. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It wasnt YOU...it was him...i dont know why people do these things but they do...thats what i dont like people very much...but dont think that you did anything wrong and you were good enough for him but for him to do this..he wasnt good enough for you ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a tough situation, and hard to go through. I wish you the best of luck... *hugs* I enjoyed this poem, and look forward to reading more! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
Krystle~ hey hun... i really feelbad about all of that not that it was really my fault. But sceretly if i know who your talking about, he still likes you. Dont give up on him ok? Think of this as a minor setback....good luck! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Grrr..evil other women. They suck! Your pain is evident in this piece. You've expressed yourself well. Try to keep your head up. The last thing you need him to see is how upset you are. Take care of yourself and thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "I don't think we should have to face all of our fears in one life." - Kevin, Seachange |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Evil women...evil men...heh...you just can't win. This isn't fair, but it's all chalked up to a "learning experience" as my good friend once told me... Live and learn...then you can find the one that was meant for you. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
You have to understand it wasn't your fault even though it's easy to blame yourself.Obviously he is a jerk and you can do better evn though it seems like he is the right one.But anyway I love this poem and I hope everything gets better for you. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
grrr...guys like him give the rest of us a bad name. Obviously if he couldn't see just how special a person u are, he's not worth the attention u give him...Anywho, luve this one... -Joe |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
I understand how you feel, having someone lead you on like that while you're pouring your heart and soul into the relationship, while he goes out completly ignoring your feelings. You speak so many truths. Good luck & Best wishes!! "I'm not afraid of anything in this world, There's nothing you can throw at me, that I haven't already heard" |
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