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Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2002-02-20 06:18 AM

~*~A Broken Promise~*~

The tears won't stop falling,
from deep inside my eyes,
Cause you finally did it,
you broke your promise to me.

You said that you,
would love me forever,
and that nothing would,
or could ever change that.

But you lied to me,
and now here I am,
with nothing more,
then a broken heart.

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-20-2002 06:19 AM).]

chas
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

1 posted 2002-02-20 09:42 AM

powerful and to the point.. this was good..

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2002-02-20 12:44 PM

Sorry Erin, I know this sucks. It's a good write though. Don't stress too much right now, it's all good. If it ain't you can always email your buddy Jon on the West Coast:-)
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

See me?
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

3 posted 2002-02-20 01:37 PM

Im sorry to hear u are hurting like this Erin, i know how it feels my heart is broken and although it can never be whole again it can be mended so just hang in there. great work keep writing. Clare x

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2002-02-20 04:40 PM

Thanks for taking the time out to read this!!! It really means alot to me...

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-02-20 06:49 PM

aww erin...im so sorry sweety :::HUGS:::

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2002-02-21 05:26 AM

">Shugar~Well thankfully this is my past!!! I just finished writing the poem after not being able to for like 2 months!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-21-2002 05:28 AM).]

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